Too relaxed for me, but a good song
Good song, though I have a few remarks (if you wish just ignore them, it's just my opinion, don't feel offended ;-) )
The windy preset coming in at 0:20, I thought it was a bit too "sharp", I don't really know how to say it. How I would fix it, I would lower the "attack" of the instrument (don't really know wether that's possible with that preset), so it kinda fades in and out instead of just starting and changing notes (maybe using a reverb is a way to do this too, just suggesting)
The guitar around 1:07, I thought with the rather harsh synths it was to soft, but then after the vocals ("prepare for launch") and the softer synths/choir coming in
around 1:46, I thought it was a bit to sharp, too steel-acoustic-guitar like. Maybe make 2 guitars instead of one? I may sound a bit difficult here, but I'm just trying to explain what I would do.
The whole section between 2:13 and 2:32 is too boring, with the preset used at 2:13 it sounded like a new melodical part coming in and I felt dissapointed when I heared it just were the same synths staying. I would have left this section out or put a new intrument in I guess.
That's all I have to say. Maybe I sound a bit harsh. You did make a good song with rich drums. It was just to slow and relaxed for me.
I would advise you to change presets so it sounds better with the song you're making. Pimp up your tune! Maybe check out some of my stuff or PM me if you like.
Gave a 6 because you used too much patches/presets :-P Don't be lazy ;-)
Peace